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for Demona pasio

by BillyTheCad

person Anon
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update?
person ethereal
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic so far. I hope you continue. It should be interesting to see what kind of a pact forms between these two. Please update soon!!

Ethereal
person Lunapokema
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wai! Please continue soon, I really love your fic. ^^ The story line is fascinating. It's so hard to find a good demon/human story.
person Seeker
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I'm crazy for thinking this, but your demons sound kinda cute. I don't know why, but they do. I like them a lot. Keep up the good work and update soon! I like your story a lot hun!
person Seeker
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting story, hun. But I really like it so far. I hope you update soon, so that I can see what happens next!!! Keep up the good work, hun!
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fixed those errors in the first chapter; sorry about that! That's what I get I guess from just skimming -- I looked it through more thoroughly the second time around.
person Cindyip
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still a few errors in spelling, but overall very nice. Want more;)
person little wind
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. This is just the kind of story that I wanted to read. The demon/demon hunter dynamic is something I've always read about--it may have been attempted before, but you obviously can make a story flow and your premise and characters are interesting. Keep up the good work!
person little wind
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. This is just the kind of story that I wanted to read. The demon/demon hunter dynamic is something I've always read about--it may have been attempted before, but you obviously can make a story flow and your premise and characters are interesting. Keep up the good work!
person Jace
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I literally found more than five mistakes in the first paragraph. It made me cringe. I cannot go on reading your story. I suggest you get a real beta because you did not do a good job self-beta'ing.