rate_review Reviews

I might be missing the point of this story, but uh...a little confused. Unless this is some sort of personal attack on a girl you know and dislike I don't really understand where you're going with this. She's ugly, she's a whore, and she ate her own vagina after mistaking it for bacon. Not very enthralling.

Take this shit off the site.

It is stupid, pointless and made absolutly no sense.
You embaress both yourself and adultfanfiction.net with this sorry attempt at writing.

Calling it horrible, plotless, stupid, pathetic and a waste of paper/computer document/files would be far more generous than I feel at this point in time.

Maybe in several years when I can convince myself to suffer through reading your work again.

Why? Why in the name of all that is good and pure...why? How did soomebody even think up something like this? *sighs*

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i think this would have been better in the "humor" section. or something. hm.

The next time you write a fanfiction like this, please make note at the beginning that it's a retarded fanfiction. Not that it's funny or amusing, that would be lying. Just that it's retarded. Thanks!

Wow, what a great story! It's amazing...your skills will earn you millions! Move over, Jane Austen, Harper Lee and JK Rowling!!!!