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for Summer Fun

by DaddysDelight

person Allie Moore
schedule November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is just plain wrong. It's incest.
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!
person Phoenix
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's okay but how is thirty five degrees hot?
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good....
person FlusterBunny
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. It's an old plot, but you worked it out well.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute ^^! It was well done too. Thank you for actually spellchecking.. I suggest more chapters.. But try to develop somewhat of ap lot it you do.. because pointless sex with this story.. Meh it could go far with a decent plot I think!
person objectlesson
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice! very sexy. The only thing, if the mother thought the father was sick for calling her name, why did she leave her daughter with him? *shrugs* just a thought. xoxo