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for Crush on you

by dondon

person Eboni
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon...I'm lovin this story!
person nesl247
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Your other one is a bit confusing. Keep it up.
person Eboni
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read chapter 2, Loved it! I know it's only chapter 2, but I have a feeling this is going to be my favorite story by you. I can relate to Leila and Fred seems like a dream. They are both down to earth with their own insecurities. Please update, this is story worth writing.
person calyciflorae
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good one..
so the shy fellow is no longer shy???
i like the way this story moves.......

i love it....
person calyciflorae
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good start... geek meets shy??
i think im gonna be the first reviewer..
u must have known ..reviews always start slow....
i hope u will update soon......
i am gonna read the other story u started that u mentioned rightnow
person Eboni
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. I like that the characters are not physically perfect and have their own insecurities. I think this will be a really good story. Update soon.