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for Crush on you

by dondon

person Sylvia
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please...
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it i hope u update again soon
person @_@
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, i really like your stories. i want to read more. please update soon. btw, i like butterfly wing also, if you have time, can you update that story also. thanks a bunch!!!!!!!
person rosie
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o0o0o0o0o ..LOVED chapter 6.....chapter7! chapter7!!! demanding chapter7!!!
person rosie
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEy wow- that was amazing- I LOVE where you are going with this- can't see what it will be like when they live together! Please update soon!!
person fire_eyez
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!! i really like it. And now that im intrigued i wont be able to stop reading it. and that cant happen unless u update. i love the story and i like Fred and Leila. reminds me of myself actually.
person Eboni
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! Update soon!
person Juliana
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AND? What happens????? Please write the next chapter =)
person AssassinRaven
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY! I like your story so far. It\'s caught my eye XD
I especially like how you made it the GUY that\'s been insecure in the beginning =3 Nice change from always hearing about the fat geeky girls ^_^ Keep up the good work!
person Shanna
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I'm actually in the process of losing weight and I have seen how it can change your popularity so I think this story will come close to home. You are doing a good jib with developing your characters, and I want to read more about them. Please update soon.