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for The Little Girl

by MJRaenism

person Ashleigh
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please.. more! :(
person syntheticillusion
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is nuts! I want more! MORE! Please update! I really hope this isn't a oneshot!
person alb2991
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was kind of creepy....The little girl and your line "I just want to play" it sent some chills down my back. But is this the whole story or is there more? I have a story too it's called "Deranged". Fell free to check it out if you want.