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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....Ok this is really creeping me out.....
Do you like... know me? This sounds really weird but um... my name is Elysia, I have red hair, and the character's fantasy is the same as mine.
The reason it creeps me out so much is Elysia is an unusual name... And... yeah, that sort of... weirds me out. Is that not oddly coincidental?
Maybe it's just me... but seriously. What made you choose that name? And then the character... sounds like me. And I mean, that name is just really unusual. So... I dunno just... e-mail me please? Tell me I'm not crazy and you know someone like that or something! Please!
Do you like... know me? This sounds really weird but um... my name is Elysia, I have red hair, and the character's fantasy is the same as mine.
The reason it creeps me out so much is Elysia is an unusual name... And... yeah, that sort of... weirds me out. Is that not oddly coincidental?
Maybe it's just me... but seriously. What made you choose that name? And then the character... sounds like me. And I mean, that name is just really unusual. So... I dunno just... e-mail me please? Tell me I'm not crazy and you know someone like that or something! Please!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well well welll, that was very mean of him to leave her hanging like that. you should continue this
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good story, do you plan on continuing it?
Just one suggestion, and it's not for your writing, it's just for formatting. It would really be helpful if you learned to skip a line between paragraphs. The way it is now, the paragraphs run together and it makes it hard to read.
Just one suggestion, and it's not for your writing, it's just for formatting. It would really be helpful if you learned to skip a line between paragraphs. The way it is now, the paragraphs run together and it makes it hard to read.