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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue please!!! i like it very much!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is so cute. there hass to be another chapter.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's not finished. finish it.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me, you write as if the boy is eight and not eighteen. The plot is good though, but the characters don´t have very good personalities. Good luck on the other stories and please update with good sex scenes.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah... Smexy... ^_^ So short yet... so thrilling... I LOVE YOU... want... more... need.. to see WHAT HAPPENDS *Panting like a mad woman* I'll leave you with my cookies *Leaves brownies* DAMN IT!!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Incest? Well I've read even more weird things before, and at least the guy isnt his REAL dad. Either way i would still read it, haha update soon...Its way too short dude, try making it last longer...k? Adios.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats... not fair *pouts* you can't end the chapter there. Well, anyways, I hope to see an update soon (and this time try ending what you start)
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O this is defiantly not my cup of tea.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Uhh so far it's interesting but I'm hoping that there is going to be a little bit more of a story to this unless it's a one-shot or something. But I hope there is more. Cause it's very good. The boy acts really young.... but thats because he hasn't really had any friends right? Update soon!