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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unless Chapter three was meant to be nothing but author's notes, I think there's been a mistake.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for fixing the error, I was wondering when I'd get to read chapter three.
I liked it. I like the switch from brutal to sweet and almost romantic. It sets the reader off gaurd and we readers need to be set off guard once in awhile. Excellent job. I'm putting this story on my recomend list.
I liked it. I like the switch from brutal to sweet and almost romantic. It sets the reader off gaurd and we readers need to be set off guard once in awhile. Excellent job. I'm putting this story on my recomend list.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I hope you keep continuing it. I can't wait to read more!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good. It's not normally something I'd enjoy, I'm not usually into pain, but you manage to make this story very good never-the-less. I agree with the others who have suggested you continue this.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start on the story. Will there be more of these two?
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you changed the summary of this, because I hadn't though I'd like it with the old one.
This is really interesting. I like the relationship between the two of them, twisted as it is. *g* I hope you're going to continue with it, I'm looking forward to reading more.
This is really interesting. I like the relationship between the two of them, twisted as it is. *g* I hope you're going to continue with it, I'm looking forward to reading more.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t understand why no one else has reviewed this!!! They are all turds anyway. I think this is fab. So there.