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I was going to review your story, but the way you have it formatted, it's next to impossible to read. Since there aren't any "tabs" in it, you might want to consider skipping a line between paragraphs. It would make the story so much easier to read.

You seem to want reviews (as all of us do) and maybe the bad formatting is influencing the number of readers and thus the number of reviews you are getting. That's why I'm mentioning this, it's not to pick on you.