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by JarvisdeVar

schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Corvis, thank you for your nice comments ;-), the next part is ready but saddly we have to wait untill March to have it on the site. Thank again and take care,

Jarvis :-).
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I thought this was a great story! I like your charachters, and the plot was constantly moving. Awesome work!
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Cody or cody you have send me the note mark no.2035630368. I do not make you the privilege to send you a personal e-mail. By the way it not difficult to find :-o. Pointing to me the book "Hooked on Phoenix", yes you just gorgot to put the e in the word Phoenix not Phonix, I did not write in English I write in French then try to translate it as good as i can. The way thah you have point it to me prove only thing, you did not worth the time I take to answer it. Than I hope that you have some other thing to do, like rub yourself. When your playing the offended virgin don't make a stupid mistake like Phoenix. Be please to not hear from you any more :-).
person johnny vicious
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great, really nice! especially for someone who's native languange is not English!! Very well done, I loved it!
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI Jonny, I thank you for your kind note and hope that you will like the rest of it. Take care, Jarvis :-)