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by phreneticice

person g
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story...sad though
person FlusterBunny
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Writing in a first person style, giving the story a chatty type of feeling is difficult. Those who are good at it make it look easy. You are one of those people. This story was excellent you should consider adding to Heather's adventures.
person swiss miss
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe this doesn't have any reviews! it's really very good! i love the descriptions and the way Heather speaks! it's brilliant! very, VERY nice.