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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is very good hope you update soon
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please keep it coming, I'm excited to see what is to come. Please Update.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on come on come on.
PLease update.
This story rocks.
PLease update.
This story rocks.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good so far
this is the first story i've read in the originals section, and i like what i've read so far
the dialogue seems a little bit stilted in a few places and you seem to describe people in the same way each time you introduce a new character (height, skin/eye/hair colour etc in a certain order)
thats the only thing i can think of that you might want to revise slightly
all in all very good though, i'll keep an eye out for the next chapter :)
this is the first story i've read in the originals section, and i like what i've read so far
the dialogue seems a little bit stilted in a few places and you seem to describe people in the same way each time you introduce a new character (height, skin/eye/hair colour etc in a certain order)
thats the only thing i can think of that you might want to revise slightly
all in all very good though, i'll keep an eye out for the next chapter :)
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep it up im really getting into this story i cant wait till Bri ad Will meet up again!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning...will be interesting to see more.
Kelly
Kelly
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
decent first chapter
only thing is that you jumped from present tense to past tense and vice versa, it's easier to read if you stick to one (personally i prefer past but that's just me).
only thing is that you jumped from present tense to past tense and vice versa, it's easier to read if you stick to one (personally i prefer past but that's just me).
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo continue please, i've never read a witch/vamp fic b4 so make this a good one!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE NOW! Lol, it is VERY VERY well written! Please write more, I'm way too into the story lol.