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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uhm..I think your story was rushed..I don't see how it could be rated NC-17. If anything maybe R, and I also do not see how you got a five rating. I mean you rushed through nearly the entire thing. Where you could have put in more detail you didn't. It would be nice if you had maybe spent a little bit more time on it. It was not what I expected at all.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice little story. The idea was well thought and the ending was great. I hope to read more of your stuff.