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for Dark Eden

by Aya

person eijikun
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't start another one when the last story isn't even finshed...although this one is good, too...but i want the other one done first.
person eijikun
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was convieniant...lol...and that was rather fast...there was no build up between them...execpt that one tinsey little scene in the last chappy...but whatever, smut is...smut...lol

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person weee
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Please update soon.
person Nenesama
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
right on! another cool story.. the plot's soooo original. really interesting characters, not stereotypes -although i've nothing against stereotypes really.. sho's so cute, eccentric and funny.. and i find tahsu cool.. giving his cookies to sho, telling him he can protect them both and all..:3 and tsukasa's not an onizuka wanna-be, i hope? update soon! love this! XD
person Hannah
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, looks great so far! I love Sho, he's crawled into my heart already lol keep up the good work bye!
person Kiira
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning! So, um, did the old literature teacher die??

I Would love to read more =)