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for Dark Eden

by Aya

person Nomadic
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sho confuses me... and why teach puts up with it has to be love. lol. I check every day for an update. And you need more smut. ;-) Just a suggestion.. though isn't this already all written? so what I say don't matter, huh? Oh well.. keep up the updates I love the story!
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dunnnnnnnnn!!! yay!
person Mavvi
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah! what are you doing? finish Zero Tolerance before starting another story.

or i'll start bothering you! update update!
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh wowo..dund dun dunn!!
person moo?
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! SO GOOOD!!!! and gawd, such a cliff-hanger!!
HOW EVILL....anyways, please update soon. I reaaallly
look forward to it. XD
person anonymous
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so great. And I'm so glad to see it's not some olf fic that's been abandoned. PLease continue soon!
person darkangel1210
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's about time we had another teacher/pupil story!

Really good, update soon!

darkangel1210
person eijikun
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, sho-sho and 'kasa made boo-boo
person eijikun
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
might you be planning a threesome between them?
person Kira
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow pretty good so far. Keep up the awsome work!

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