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for Dark Eden

by Aya

person moi
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahhahaah sucker!!! tsukasa, i mean. hahahaha!!! GO SHO!!!!!!!
person eijikun
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
but...but...he's still gonna be a writer, right? and they're not gonna fight about it? .......i don't like fights........

neways, *scratches head* another great chapter! when 'lil bro coming? lol and why no...big...sex scene? everyone needs they're daily dose of sex...meh, up to u...love ya anyways.

ja
person anonymous
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mm..... continue soon. love this fic. so well-written and interesting, and i love the characters.
person Nenesama
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.. too many updates.. i stopped at 2 and then there's 14 chapters already?!? how long have i been gone?
onizuka wanna-be.. heehee sorry take too long to answer XD onizuka's a teacher, anime character, has no degree in teaching and no love for school, but ends up teaching a room full of delinquents, he's cool but i had enough of teachers who were gangsters for now.. though its a funny anime, its not bad, i think i just want a more serious teacher right now.and i love your tsukasa :) though things happened quite too fast.
but totally love your fic!! its kind of silly and funny, sho's terribly cute, he amuses me too! lol.. i have to say i like tahsu more, and hasu too well they're really crazy haha.. though i was thinking of tahsu/sho but oh well. tsukasa's being a good guy now and you got rid of the parents! roflol.. guess im liking tsukasa now, as long as he stays good! sigh.. i wish id been able to check more often T_T what a bummer.. i dont like this, missing out good things.. feh.
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I love it. I can't wait to read more. (Sorry, I suck a reviews...)
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww i love it!
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh no!!
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for trying to fit in my comment of lemon..:)
person eijikun
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yahoo!!! new chapter...
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he can wait for sex, but i need a lemon!