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June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this has potential although it was a bit sudden, I like the way you write even if each chapter had only a few lines .
apologized, as in he apologized for something he did wrong. That's what you wanted to write but you said you can't spell, right? :)
apologized, as in he apologized for something he did wrong. That's what you wanted to write but you said you can't spell, right? :)
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay just want to say that this is good stuff but I didn't like the fact that you didn't really understand he was a gigolo until the end of the second chap. All in all though keep up the good work.