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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its different from your usual stuff but still it was good...don't see what the problem was, he got caught out, it had a just ending. anyways its just a story...very good..look forward to reading more of your work..
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Er... It was interesting, I'll give you that.
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February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting (and I can see why fathers everywhere would be outraged) but it also has the moral of that if you do something horrible, you will get caught, and to do such an abominable thing is never worth it-it only hurts everyone, even the criminal, in the long/short run.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hardly think they would let me submit stories to AdultfanFic from a cell in Folsom County jail!! Of course I did not thus abuse my daughter - it is just a story! Obviously too realistic it seems!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, so you really did this to your daughter???
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least the ending was all right. I know your usual storylines involve children, but a lovely sequel to this would be these vile creatures that pass themselves off as men, getting brutalized in prision.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I liked it, anyway.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have fun in hell.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HellSpawn, Watch out for dark alleys and guys called Bubba or vicious little girls with broom handles, least you reap what you sow!