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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.. Yummy goodness. Very very nice. update quickly please?
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting, please update soon
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was freaky. But I am curious as to what will happen, so update soon.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, forgive me for using this as a message board....if you want to erase this after reading, I understand.
But first of all THANK YOU! I was wondering why my 3rd chapter was running all over the place, but I couldn't figure out why. Then you pointed out the line of ==== I had. So, I could fix the problem and know what to do in the future!
I understand completely about editing driving it to the top of the list. It seems like every time I look at my story, I find one little thing I want to fix and I fix it and boom, there it goes, to the top, and I feel I'm irking people off. "Gesh, all she did was edit it!" That doesn't even bother me.
What irritated me was that I saw the story had a new chapter, I went to read the chapter and I find a note saying, "Well, I'll put up a chapter soon, but not right now!" I was looking forward to a new chapter and suddenly, I have to wait. That's what was bothering me. Editing as you find mistakes so your story is driven to the top of the list? That doesn't bother me and I completely understand.
But first of all THANK YOU! I was wondering why my 3rd chapter was running all over the place, but I couldn't figure out why. Then you pointed out the line of ==== I had. So, I could fix the problem and know what to do in the future!
I understand completely about editing driving it to the top of the list. It seems like every time I look at my story, I find one little thing I want to fix and I fix it and boom, there it goes, to the top, and I feel I'm irking people off. "Gesh, all she did was edit it!" That doesn't even bother me.
What irritated me was that I saw the story had a new chapter, I went to read the chapter and I find a note saying, "Well, I'll put up a chapter soon, but not right now!" I was looking forward to a new chapter and suddenly, I have to wait. That's what was bothering me. Editing as you find mistakes so your story is driven to the top of the list? That doesn't bother me and I completely understand.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far! Update Soon!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good story. But, I have to admit, I was a bit irritated that you "updated" by saying that you'll update. Why not just wait until you actually are going to post the chapter? You could have put that warning at the top of the page.
Still, as I said, it's a good story and I hope you continue.
Still, as I said, it's a good story and I hope you continue.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Melody -
I can see why you'd be irritated. That chapter has /been/ up. When it gets bumped to the top of the list, usually, I'm finding typos in my writing and fixing them. That's all.
Sorry about the misunderstanding.
- UK
I can see why you'd be irritated. That chapter has /been/ up. When it gets bumped to the top of the list, usually, I'm finding typos in my writing and fixing them. That's all.
Sorry about the misunderstanding.
- UK
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It's cool reading things about brothers having their way with their sisters. It turns me on! Update as soon as possible!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey you gotta keep goinng with this story although it is a lil gross that chylers brother wants to have sex with her 0.o
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like you premise, it apeals to my dirtier side. I look forward to more chapters^^