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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Sam, let me put it this way--there are SO MANY WARNINGS on this particular story? I think they run off. You don't have to read if you have a problem with it, and saying more would give the rest away.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you can't end it like that!!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, are you sure this isn't horror? Lol, don't keep us in suspense too long. What happens? We want to know! You have a good style, btw. You build mood very well and we get an excellent idea of the characters. I haven't seen a lot of people manage the different points of view well, but it apparently works for this story. Nicely done. Write on! ^^
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang it! Update and update soon! How dare you end it so soon!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm a new reader.. I dont really like Michael but I love James and chyler.. OMG I love the name chyler :)Its a cute love story for james and chyler :) I really really hope James comes back in time to save her.. like he had this bad feeling.. or he forgot something and heard her screaming ro something
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u didnt even update!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow thsi story is sooo hot! PLease update soon!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and update please- and when you do e-mail me please!
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i lovee this story.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! im so curious whats gonna happend to the poor girl PLEASE PLEASE finish this story
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it post more soon