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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue!! dont stop now
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story soon. I am not normally in to this sorta story but this has just sucked me right in, no pun in tended. The desire to know what else happens is great. Please keep up the story.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was just... wow. So hot!! :P
I do so enjoy the torment that Michael puts Chyler through. You write it so graphically, I just can't help but picture everything in my head. Perhaps its a bit sick, the fact that I enjoy things like that, but hey... Can't help it. :P
Hope to see more from you soon! I was really tickled when I saw that you had finally updated your fic. :) Keep up the great work!
I do so enjoy the torment that Michael puts Chyler through. You write it so graphically, I just can't help but picture everything in my head. Perhaps its a bit sick, the fact that I enjoy things like that, but hey... Can't help it. :P
Hope to see more from you soon! I was really tickled when I saw that you had finally updated your fic. :) Keep up the great work!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy mother of pearl that was hot. every single moment i was reading this i was absolutely riveted and absolutely horny. amazing job please update soon
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay normally i skip over incest fics because i'm usually totally grossed out by them, but this is damn fucking good! i've never been so intrigued and so aroused by a brother/sister fic but my God you're good! excellent piece of work you have here please update soon!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg please continue the story want to know what happens next with everyone
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to echo this sentiment - FUCK HER HARDER ;) can't wait for the next update
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As far as I am concerned James can stay out of it. I think this should stay in the family.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story so far XD
Fairly well written, though im terribly picky so dont take that as an uncompliment.
Keep up the good work, and maybe tone down the "shes so hot" ness. Makes it seem Despie ^^
Luffles luffles, Ill be reading on ^^
Fairly well written, though im terribly picky so dont take that as an uncompliment.
Keep up the good work, and maybe tone down the "shes so hot" ness. Makes it seem Despie ^^
Luffles luffles, Ill be reading on ^^
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, that I can say for sure. I feel real sorry for Chyler, but obviously Michael's got some issues. Too bad for James, he never got the chance to take Chyler's virginity...