rate_review Reviews

Christ it reminds me of my ex. First night we did it in his Matrix and I litterally screamed out "Oh my god!". I've never had somebody with his size--and Mike? Good Heavens, my twat's designed to mold and squeeze those sizes specificallu--seriously! I'm naturally tight to thick meat.

Oh you CAN'T end it here. I mean... it's a great tale but come ON! Write more, please! Me, and everyone else reading this tale, is begging you. I'm sure your life is getting too hectic to go on but make an actually story out of this--instead of a short blurp. How hard can it be? And with the beauty of your writing style, it'll be simple for you to get published. I for one will purchase a copy.

Lmao! I love the ending. So is this an incest story? Good thing I decided to read tonight. I'm favoring this tale. I'm happy I don't have a brother because I'm sure I would have done him by now. Especially when he learned that I'm amateur modeling and some of the shoots I do aren't clean.

Ahhh damn. *shudders* This is remarkable! I kind of wish Mike was my brother--I wish I had a brother.

when will you be getting the next chapter out?

Oh thank you for this update at last. Was begining to wonder what would happen to the poor girl. Please do continue. Dieing to know if she is ever saved from her bothers use or if she will be used by him this way forever.

ok well i know im seriously disturbed by even reading this but man i cant get this out of my mind like a horror movie u can never forget plz for god sakes make some happy ending in this so i can replace what is consantly going thou my mind with somthing more .... enjoyable but non the less for what u were going for u did a gread job but for my sake plzzzzzz something um...somthing happy anything well great job keep up the good work and hopefully next time i read this story i can have somthing more plzsent to dream about ^_^ o and if i was to sore it i would give it a um... ive read some realy good ones hum....ok well for what ur going for it a 4 out of 5 in my book for what i would like to see form this its a 3 out of 5 maybe i sould just check out some romance ^_^ bye bye and good luck

Oh my god. That is so twisted, but really hot at the same time. Please send another chapter up for me to read!!! lol

Please stop the torture :(

Whoa...Hot!
Now, is Chyler going to go running straight to her parents, or the cops? Or is she going to willingly become her brothers whore?
Will be watching to see where this goes!