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Aw, Eva's got a date! I am loving this story!

Ahhhh!

What a cliffy! How did Colin know about Eva being 'Eva Taggart'? Please update soon!

Dear Melody,

I love this fic, and here's why:
- it's mature,
- it's smutty, and
- it's the only fic on this site that I've actually ever followed up on, and NOT just because of the sex.

So, kudos, dear. Can't wait for the sixteenth chapter. Cheers,

Kobe G.

OMG you can't just leave it there!This story is awesome please update it soon

oh funny so he does know, i thought he did. i don't think he was serious about the blackmail thing. hopefully they can bond over it or something. i really like the thing with her and that paul guy, does he know too? smacks an ass... so in a way i hope they are over and move on or something. although i do enjoy them together and her with anyone else right now but in the end i want her to be with vic. sorry for the babble it's so late and i am very tired lol anyway so keep up the good work this is one of the best on here and very nice to read smut or not. update soon! oh and just in case you would like to know (if you really even care lol it's hard sometimes being in the medical feild and not putting something in there to help sorry) girls are usually done growing at around 15 not many grow much after that although that is when they start to fill out more growing into a woman's shape. boys can grow until 21 years of age. i'm sure that she will fill out and that she isn't as horrible looking as she thinks. i think she might be very attractive and that she just has a low confidence and that shows though, plain can be pretty too. i can't wait for more :)

Oooh! I is gonna kill you! I hate cliff-hangers!!!

Great fucking chapter. Loved it. Don't make your loyal fans wait any longer then we have to!

"perminant" I read this word as "peppermint" believe it or not
"whimiscle" I kept thinking: "popcicle" for some odd reason.
I'm intending to read this chapter again. Not just because I think its good, but because every time I sat down, people kept asking me questions and saying things like: "So what are you going to do with that pimpmobile?" and the question wasn't even directed at me. The dog is sick, it's hotter at the beginning of the day than it was at the end of yesterday. And (naughty me) I was listening to my music collection and "Malevolent Skies" came up, so I had to pause and watch it. Laundry, cleaning up the pizza boxes, yet even with all these distractions, I saw in this chapter a strange culmination of events that jive with the flow of the story, the season that's upon us and well, it seemed so relevant. I can never get enough of Eva's slant on life, each character, even the new ones, adding a breath of fresh air to every chapter. I love the comments the guys make to one another. I even like the shallow Tiffany (good name pick btw). It's neat and it's real. I hold you in great affection and esteem. affection for you. esteem for the work. I like how you think of food and sleep and illness as part of someone's daily existance. I loved the ending too. I thought for sure Colin's little speech was going to START with the Taggert thing. ("Busted!" I thought) I am intrigued by the turn of events. I'm wondering when she's going break. That's the thing. I'm wondering that.

Wow, I really liked this story. It was just what I was looking for. A story with a little sex in it. You have wonderful character development and though Eva has done a lot of stupid things, some of it could be chalked up to naiveté. Keep up the good work. I kept waiting for her father to show up at the festival, but you put in a good twist. Two thumbs up! :)

awesome i am doing a dance right now lol smack is soooo jealous! i love it! i love the paul thing too! i was wondering when someone would reconize her, it's getting so good, just when you think it couldn't get any better it does, great job! it seems that you are able to push forward and are passed your block. can't wait for the next chapter, no really i can't ooooooo!

Oh. My. God. That is SO unfair. Not cool, not cool, not cool at all. You can't just end the chapter like that? "Or maybe I should say Eva Taggart?" Eeee! Chapter sixteen! NOW!

All right, after getting that out, I must say that I have been following your story for a while now, but up until today I never got a chance to review. I really love it. I do. It's brilliant. The plot is wonderful, the chapters are a great length (not too short), and the smut is pretty damn good. Granted, I do look for more than just smut, and your writing is the perfect mix of both. I can't even begin to describe how wonderful it is. Like, no, seriously, I can't come up with words to do it justice.

I have to say that my absolute favorite scene was in (I think) chapter thirteen when Loaded Gun is playing "Paradise By the Dashboard Light" from Meatloaf. That is one of my absolute favorite songs, and I can picture that scene so well. You did a marvelous job with it. I actually had to go listen to the song after reading that. XD

I do have a few things to point out, however. Your grammar is superb, but on occasion I see a few small mistakes, such as using "to" instead of "too." It's nothing horrendous, and it doesn't happen often, but there are mistakes. Yes, I know, no one is perfect. I just wanted to point it out to you. Also, it might just be some coding problem, but every time I see the word expression, it always looks like this: "_expression." It has a little underscore before it. I'm just wondering if it's something you're doing, or if you have no idea at all what I'm talking about. I'm not suggesting you go back and change it, 'cause it's not a big deal. I think it adds some character or something. Maybe I'm just weird.

Yes, I love the story. I cannot wait for more. ^_^