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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noo....! No Paul and Eva! Eww! NO! ME NO LIKIE! And I's sorry I do love this story but this chapter... me no likey.... not one bit... and quite honestly? I want this festival over with so that Paul can get his scrawny ass away from Eva! Plain and simple! Oh well... I await the next update!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say, you keep writing, and keep looking for more sites to post your work. Some people will never get over the fact it's fiction (for example, the commotion Da Vinci Code made **rolls eyes**). Spread that magic! Confessions of a Runaway is WONDERFUL! Me gusta, I like. Keep up the good work, and that was very kind of you to write a "PBS" asking people to try donating to AFF if possible. I think users and readers talking about things such as that gives AFF a kind of comfort zone it wouldn't normally have. Either way, I can't wait till the next chapter. :) Write on!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@16. I considered leaving this review: "my heart started pounding when Eva and Paul ended up in the RV. This chapter is sheer brilliance, you not only captured that muse, but did something extremely pleasing to her in order for you to have strung such evocative sentences together."
Then, I considered leaving this review: "God, I'm a puddle at your feet, and there I worship"
Then, I thought I'd just better say this: "Somehow, down the middle of the last end of the middle, I started to cry..."
Then, I considered leaving this review: "God, I'm a puddle at your feet, and there I worship"
Then, I thought I'd just better say this: "Somehow, down the middle of the last end of the middle, I started to cry..."
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful... good for her
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! You are sucha great writer! The only thing I don't like is Smack. I REALLY don't like him. But Anyways, it's not my story and all, but I'm just saying, I Hate Smack! AGAIN, Anyways, I love your story, Keep writting!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh. you knew someone was going to figure it out! good chapter.
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well it had to happen sooner or later, guess her days with the band are numbered. this makes me a lil sad even though it's a realistic turn of events. looking foward to ur next update.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's been ages since I've read this story. All I can say is what a twist at the end of this chapter! I never saw it coming! Fantastic work!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah. The storyline of Vic and Becca was great, a fantastic idea. Great writing!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter. The scene at the end between Smack and Eva was
superb! Smack is really posessive, isn't he?
superb! Smack is really posessive, isn't he?