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God..the people that are so mad at you and want to "throw" you in jail...I just think they should spend their time and efort to see that human trafficing came to an end and that underage pornstars got help!


Great story btw. Already waiting for next ch!

Another great chapter. I was almost checking hourly to see if you had put up chapter 16 yet.

Paul and Eva. . . Yummy. It wasn't as 'lemony' as some of your other sex scenes, but it was still a good one.

I am not sure about this, but I have a feeling Eva will be calling her father very soon.

Thank you for your review! I wanted to respond, because I am enjoying your story very much. I was actually reading your latest chapter before I posted this, and I wished to tell you that it is extremely well written and enjoyable. I read what you wrote below the last chapter though, and I completely agree. Your story is just that, a story, and fictional. Although I do see why people may object to the idea of 15 year olds having sex disturbing, it is an undeniable fact that they do engage in these activities. Also, I think your character Eva is mature for her age, and it's all pretty realistic to me that she would be having sex in your story because that's how life was during the time your story takes place. I felt horrible when reading the thing about AFF, though, because it's true. I would like to donate but right now my financial circumstances are similar to yours, and it's just not possible. However, I know for a fact that when I am able to, I definitely will do so. Anyway, please continue your story, I really like it. :)

I have been reading this story for some time now and think that it is amazing. Your writing style really seems professional. This story is better than most novels I pick up in a book store. I still can't believe that with all the warning that you give at the beginning of each chapter, people are still behaving like children. I do not, under ANY circumstances, encourage under-age sex, but people need to realize that this story is fictional. Hats off to you for continuing to write this great story, despite all the pressure to quit it. Lots of Love.

Hi.. ok I was freaking out it took me like Five Min. after reading this story to think of something to write. I was just shell shocked. OK I think she should go and have a BIG fight with Smack.. he confronts her when she walks in the room in the morning.. he is all like where were you.. she is like why do you care.. she basically outs her feels about this double standered shit.. and during this fight fest he yells out something like because I care about you and that scares me.. I care for you and I worry about you.. I get jelous.. I have never felt like this twords a person its always been about just sex but with you its different.. and I guess I go with all those other girls because I want you to be jelous I want you to feel the same way.. and mabye I am trying to ignore the way I feel because of your age.. its not right infact its illegal...

ok yea there is my great Idea ok well mabye not.. She wont leave the band will she.. I mean loaded gun is her family they are so close infact I thing she has used the term 'family' when talking about them before. besides she cant be with paul because well he cant last as long as smack.. and yea thats all I got I'm reaching.. besides the fact that the sex wasnt as hot but you cant base a relationship upon that.. OOO and when you said the whole thing about love being great.. well my grandmother used to say that "Love is only fun when the feelings are mutual"

another wonderful chapter keep them comming!!

awesome chapter1 can't wait for the next one!!!!6

Great chapter *CLAPS*
Your right about us supporting AFF. thank you for letting us know and for writing your story.
I wonder how eva is going to feel the next day? can't wait to read and find out.

I really love this story, I constantly check to see if there is new chapter. One thing (out of many) that I like about your story is that it has a plot, its not just all sex. But when there is sex it fits into the story and isn't out of place. I have to admit, I really like the Smack/Eva pairing. I know there is an age difference but I really think they are cute together (well Smack does need to stop with the double standard bull shit). Your a very talented writer!!! Please update soon, I am excited to see what happens next!

I love your story. I wish I could give money, but college is killing me. But when I do get some money I'm going to give alot. Please keep writing this story, I'm so in love with it. PLease Please update soon.