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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice beginning keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your writting, it's very real, and entertaining. I would greatly appreciate it if you continued writting, I'm interested in finding out what happens to Eve.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHMIGOSH!!!!! Please do not let this be a one shot! It is so fucking good! You have serious talent in writing and laying it out all right and things. Please don't leave this and me hanging.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! KEEP GOING!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story...please write more.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Story sucks
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shit thats was a good start i say. i do what to read what happens next. update !!!!!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty damn good. I really want to know what happens to her next.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Can't wait to see where else you plan on going with this. Until next time...
~Diana
~Diana
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue this. it'd be nice to see the rest of the story and what happens next.