rate_review Reviews

Work well done... please continue... it's got more potential... a lot more potential. Smack is definitely a strong lead for gullible, sex-craved Eva... it's almost too bad we already know that he doesn't play a part in her today life.

Very interesting story but she should have sex with the other band members than Smack. Vic should be a good candidate.

You should definitely keep adding to this. Now, I'm curious about Eva and Vic. Is there something there? I wouldn't hate that. Maybe he could make her see that Smack is sick and just wants her for sex and that it isn't a good thing. Please update. This is such a good read.

Hey! it's so cool, keep up with it! i don't want it to be a one-shot
Update!
Ya doin' great *thumbs up*

Ah, girls and their obsession with androgeny. Forever will it be a mystery to me. Anyway, it's not exactly the type of story I usually read, (and I'll admit, sometiems I avoid) I thought this one was very well written. I like the story developement, and despite the fact she is, as she says, an idiot, you made her very likable. The story is very well done, and it and the characters are believable to a point. Well done.

Now for the spellchecking: Not bad. I noticed here and there that some words could have been switched to make the story smoother for me to read, and sometimes I had to go back to re-read some of the sentences I already read. But that's my style, I like the story to flow. But of course there was the fact it was done in first person, and since I don't do my stories that way, I usually have a different style to try to make it flow. I'm rambling, aren't I? Yes I am. I'll shut up now. Overall, no spelling or bad grammer that I could see. Well done.

I'll definately recommend this work.

Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck

I really want you to update another chapter about her adventures. This was hot!

Friggan sexiest story in the world! Continue!!!

Very good. Can't wait for more.

I hope this isn't a one shot. I really like this story. I like how it is being told, like a memory. I like the characters in the story and how much you delved into describing them. Not to mention how hilarious the other guys in the band are. I like the relationship between Smack and Eve. Even though they aren't a real couple, it seems almost that her memory of him was very fond as she remembers these times with him. I like that Vic character, he sounds sexy, I think it would be very interesting if something happened between them, even you said that he wasn't willing to share. I just it would really add something. I really hope you add to this story. I like your writing style and I like how long it is. Some writers don't write enough and that wasn't a problem with this. Thanks for producing such an awesome story, I really hope you continue on more with it.
PEACE Isa

I liked the story.

Although I think she needs more variety, someone other then Smack. Heh.