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Excellent!!!! This chapter was very satisfying! Truthfully, my views are that she is sorta looking like a whore right now but maybe she doesn't fully understand the concept of it. A sugestion for the near future maybe, could be that she realizes that she's truly only being used and that Vic's right and she turns down Smack in front of him and keeps turning smack down. Eventually she and Vic get together even through his moralls of her being a child.

i want to know how she isnt pregnant yet lol

I love this story!! please update, you had me shitting in my pants for more...9)9 ok yes thtat was a weird comment..lol but its staying..im too lazy to push the delete butten or key or whatever...anyways..i just wanna say i love this chap and please, please, please, please continue..please? LD thanks!

this is a very well written story, and i love it. its not what i normally go for, far from. the on complaint i might have is um... if she was a virgin... where was her virginity? the first time between her and smack.... there was no mention. just a minor glitch that nagged me to no end. great story, keep going.

KaS

Whoa! I really love this! It's well written and it makes me as horny as hell! Please keep it up. I'll continue to read so please! Thank you.

I love this story...I can't wait to see where you take it! Keep up the great job!!!

Excellent story. It's got a lot of power. My three favorite things: Music, Angst, and Sex. Interesting storyline and good boner-fuel. You have mad talent.

That was really good. I still can't help but like Vic alot though. Even though he says these things about her, I think it's more. To me at least, even if it's not further from your vision. Nice for me to keep in my head. I liked his talk with Eva. And the scene with Joel was hot. I liked that alot, I just feel very in favor towards Vic. Awesome chapter. It was really hot.

OK, at first, I was like "Um...she's only 15. What the hell?" but as I continued reading I was very much so intrigued. I like the character definition you have, and the plot. It's amazing. (: It isn't too farfetched, but it's a good out of the ordinary story. I know I'm going to sound really stupid and pathetic, but is she ever going to *love* someone? I understand she doesn't love Smack, what a perv., but is she going to love anyone? D: I'm sorry...but...yeah. Haha, I can't help it, I'm a love lover.

"Why did god create the orgasm? To tell you morons to stop fucking!" That's classic right there...

Thanks for the review and the recommendation! You made my day. Anyway, back to your review. Somehow, halfway reading this I can tell that this wasn't going to end well. And it isn't is it? These situations never do, blinded by sexual need and desire while people are manipulated into situations they will regret. It's not love that's calling its lust. I'll stop now. Good job, I'm really enjoying the characters, but I REALLY think that Eva needs to grow up mentally, and listen to Vic. But this isn't my story, it's yours and you should write the events and I'll sit here and grumble about them. Am I rambling again?

Well written I should say, and I'm glad a lot of people are enjoying it. It's getting me anxious and worked up, the mark of a good story. Keep writing.

Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck

P.S. "If this isn't your cup of tea..." where have I heard that before ;p