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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue cause i know there more to come!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i rly like this story PLZZZZ CONTINUE
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
with each chapter it gets better and better! i would love to see her get off with another girl without smack of course and i wonder if vic has feelings for her and her beeing 15 bothers him too much to do anything... well checking every couple of hours for more lol please update soon!!!!!!!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very good and very hot scene
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story! I love the first person narrative style. And its pretty hot too.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see more with Vic.
So far it's great, and long! I love it!
Please update soon! <333
So far it's great, and long! I love it!
Please update soon! <333
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story. please keep posting up chapter's. And will she tell them or will they find out who she really is. so please update soon.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
But I have to agree with a lot of the reviewers here...
Maybe Vic can show her there's a way to get what she wants w/o being Smack's little sex toy. I'd really like to see him (Smack) get his:)
But I have to agree with a lot of the reviewers here...
Maybe Vic can show her there's a way to get what she wants w/o being Smack's little sex toy. I'd really like to see him (Smack) get his:)
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is fantastic! i love it!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. This is _really_ good. As in, one of the best-written stories I've ever seen here. Please keep going, I'd love to read more!