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i liked this, but after listening to eva letting him degrade her, and ordering her around so much, i wish she would just take vic's advice. she deserves better than smack-he's a sick freak!

i like that vic doesnt like people taking advqantage of eva, and that the rest of the band had enough morals to stop when they found out she was only 15.

Well, this story is actually very good! The summary didn't catch my attention at first glance, but after reading some other stuff I checked it out. This story is quite believable, and I'm very interestedin whats gonna happen. The characters just seem really developed and interesting people. I must admit, I'm falling in love with Vic. He;s just such a sweet heart! :p the sex scenes are very well done too, and I think they're quite realisitic. Keep up the good work and I await the next chapter!

this story keeps getting even better as you add to it. sorry about not reviewing chapter 2, i have no excueses for that even if i am busy at school. leaves cookies.

Great story. I hope there is more to it. It really got me hooked. And your characters are so three-dimensional, like they have a life of their own.

It's just me, but I'd like to see Eva and Vic hook up. ;)

Awww, I heart the guys so much! Smack is just a prick though..haha

Wow! I'm going to add this one to my favorites. Extremely hot! You write very well, and I'm not constantly tripping over spelling and/ or grammatical errors.

Hey Melody, good work on the third chapter, things are looking up for your characters. Okay a couple of good ideas you had, especially the heath concerns of your readers. Masterbation is not the ONLY 100% way of making sure you don't contract an STI. Complete and utter celibacy is an excellent way as well, but then again, where is the fun in that? ;p

Ahh, so the psychological rape continues. I'm glad that you mentioned that orgasms can be physical and mental as well, that people who are having sex against there will can still have orgasms. It's an important fact most people seem too ignore. I can see now that Vic is on to the "something is going on" frame of mind, so we might see some help coming the way of our little victim.

Good work. Just a minor typo here and there, nothing to be TOO worried about. Keep up the good work. I might take up those warnings as well if you don't mind and place them in some of my stories if that's okay. I'll reword them for my own purposes, but I think they are really important.

Oh, don't worry if the comments stop coming. It doesn't necessarily mean that we don't like it anymore. It hasn't stopped me from writing. *tear*. Just continue to write what you like, and write because you enjoy what you're doing. You're focus as a writer of a non-profit fanfiction is not only to please your audience, but to produce something that you are happy with as well. And no matter what some people will think, there will always be a pervert-I mean person out there who will enjoy masterbat- I mean reading it. Yes that's what I meant...Ahem... (Not all of us are masterbating to your work...)

Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck

I bet if you edit it some, you can make this in a better good book.

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If i\'m not playin, im layin..haha priceless. Poor Vic though...what a sweetheart.^^