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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate Smack so much, he is such a jerk!
Vic is sweet though.
Vic is sweet though.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is just great! I can't wait for an update!
Smack has got to go! Vic is a great guy...I hope they end up together or something.
Maybe Vic can beat Smacks ass in? XD
Update soon!
-Jenna-
Smack has got to go! Vic is a great guy...I hope they end up together or something.
Maybe Vic can beat Smacks ass in? XD
Update soon!
-Jenna-
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fucking HELL this is some good shit... Keep on writing... You gotta real talent there.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Knock off a few of the, like, "=" things. The spacers. They widen the screen and you have to scroll to view and entire sentence.
Very good chapter.
Very good chapter.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know that I think you're a fantastic writer, and your story really catches and holds the reader's interest to the point where they stay up hours longer than they should, reading [cough]. :)
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is actually quite good! O_o i mean yeah- a lot of smut is just that... smut. But you really worked with your charachters, and they are develloping nicely. T_T i wanna know who the stranger is!! Write more!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this was one of my favorite chapters, not to say the others weren't just as good. I simply like what was going on in this chapter. I'm hoping that things between Vic and Eva will actually go further or something but you may have different plans that could make this story even better than a Vic/Ea pairing. I'll await your next chapter. Thanks for writing this!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good an i loved the part where the quy defend her an i also want to know who the stranger was maybe ...(sorry i forgot his name) can tell her
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, it's me again. don't make eva hook up with vic!!! not for awhile anyway. i was reading the other reviews and i saw a lot or requests for them to become an item, but i personally think it's too soon for that. i really liked the thing going on between smack and eva in the first chapter but now smack's just pushing it too far.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing and all the characters rock!!!!! PLEASE update soon, i'm hooked!