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Chapter 4 = BEST CHAPTER YET!
Loving it! Even the lesbian action(and i'm not into that, personaly)!
You write very well, I must say!
I would like to see why Vic is the way he is.
It can't just be that Eva is so young, there's got to be something else bothering him.
Like maybe...he wants her? I hope! XD That would be perfect!
When will the band find out about her past? Cause whenever they do, she should
'spill the beans' to Vic, and he return the favor with what his past was.
Just some ideas, though! I LOVE this story!
Update soon!!!!
-Jenna-

I do love reading this fic--not least because it's written by someone who knows what she's writing about. Most fics on this site seem to be written by ignorant virgins, judging by the inaccuracies--but also because you created believable characters. Well done.

First I got in here for the sex and rock n'roll, but now it's becoming an habit and I always look forward to the next chapter! It's the best erotic story I have ever read, that I wouldn't even call it erotic, it's more of an erotic drama and I LOVED IT.
Congratulations, you're AMAZING!!!

wow this is amazing i really hope that you will update soon Smack is such an ass i would love it if the guys would kick the shit out of him just a thought lol anyways please update soon much love Lily

AH! I've been reading this since you posted it! And, Sorry I didn't review the first two chapters. I love this story! It's really descriptive, if that's the right word. Lol. Will Eva ever find out who really did fuck her? Anyway, I can't wait till chapter 4!

I've really enjoyed the story so far. I've never seen one so detailed before. It's great! Can't wait to see what happens in the future and if she ever tells the others what she's really upset about!

Great job with chapter #3. I'm glad that the guys are watching out for her. but i have a funny feeling that i may know who slept with her that day. it's a good story so far, i really want to read more of whats going to happen next. update soon.

Poor Eva. She's so clueless... Urgh! I just want to KILL Smack! God! He aggrivates me so much! And Joel... They both do. Eva, Eva, Eva... *sighs*. Poor kid. I just want to go into the story and help her out myself! She thinks she OWES everybody something when she DOESN'T. I hate Smack for taking advantage of that. Bleh. Oh well. I hope conditions improve for our rockstar over there!

Tear Smack apart. Please? You'll make all of our days. He's a jerk. Not to mention 110% oblivious and stone-cold towards Eva. She doesn't deserve being treated like a whore. I loved how you pointed out that an orgasm in session of non-consensual sex doesn't make it not rape. It's a totally true issue that should be addressed more often. You're a brilliant author, really. You put such personality and bang into you're characters, it moves me. Like Eva, for instance. And Smack, who really just needs to get smacked... and hard... and Vic. As well as Joel and everyone else. Jesus. This is an amazing story.

That was a really good chapter. I liked all the effort the three guys put into making her feel better. It is always better to have an ally. It was really sweet to read the interaction between Eva and Vic. I know have said it before, but I can't help but be attached to Vic. I like him so much. It really sucks that all he sees is the little sister in her, but I guess thats good, cause he cares for her and so do the other guys, Tray and Dennis. I think it is pretty cool. I like this story alot. I hope to see a new chapter really soon. So please update.