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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, I love this story so much! I'd like her to be with Smack soooo much!!! I sort of like their relationship! ^^
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyyy! sweet chapter, that was hot! i check every chance i get to see if you've updated and i was so happy when i saw a new one today. hope to see the next one soon!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! That was amazing...After this, reading ALL of this, I believe I may go out and get a vibrator myself! -smile- You did an amazing job doll, keep it up. I'd love to keep reading. You have quite a way with words! Congratulations, you wrote an amazing story!
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Tesoya
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeey-
That was kick bootay! I hope sumthin happens between the chickn
vic that wold be cuuute! when u update please e-mail me k? Then if u don't ill never know what happens next. I'll leave a long update if you do ;D
That was kick bootay! I hope sumthin happens between the chickn
vic that wold be cuuute! when u update please e-mail me k? Then if u don't ill never know what happens next. I'll leave a long update if you do ;D
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like Feelings! *ducks*
Well, it would appear that things our looking up for our little heroin, but swaggering around like a boy in the locker room? *cringes* I got that enough in high school. I still can't see this getting any better...
Well done. I think that the story is slowing down just a tad, but that depends highly on where you want to go with this. Not much else to point out except one thing: You put Stealth in the place of Smack during the sex scene...unless you're not telling us something...:S
Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
Well, it would appear that things our looking up for our little heroin, but swaggering around like a boy in the locker room? *cringes* I got that enough in high school. I still can't see this getting any better...
Well done. I think that the story is slowing down just a tad, but that depends highly on where you want to go with this. Not much else to point out except one thing: You put Stealth in the place of Smack during the sex scene...unless you're not telling us something...:S
Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn fine story this is turning out to be.
Loved the fourth chapter, the interactions between Pam and her were great, and I'm not talking just about sex. :)
Great characthers, overall. The plot (there is a plot here, right? I'm not sure if I've recognized it or not >.<'' ) is nice.
Really, this is becoming a great story. Hope you'll end it (eventually). ^^
Loved the fourth chapter, the interactions between Pam and her were great, and I'm not talking just about sex. :)
Great characthers, overall. The plot (there is a plot here, right? I'm not sure if I've recognized it or not >.<'' ) is nice.
Really, this is becoming a great story. Hope you'll end it (eventually). ^^
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like where you're going with this. its kinda creapy that i connect with eva with her relationship with smack. i really enjoy reading the story. please continue? feel free to contact me. i'm a total fan
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. The part with Eva and Smack at the beginning was sort of sweet when he appologized. The rest was just hilarious. The whole thing especially the end. Totally hilarious. I am still so interested in Vic. I have no idea what to make of him. He is so different from the other guys that you wonder what maked them friends. But I like all the differences in all of them. This chapter was very good. Like all of the other chapters. I am looking forward to the next of course. I hope you able to update soon.
PEACE Isa
PEACE Isa
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello
this story is one of my favourites, and I will add it as soon as my computer allows me to get into my personal account. The characters you have created are so real and life like and I have to say Eva reminds me very much of myself... *sigh...*
its rare to find a gem like this on this site sometimes
I cannot wait for the next chapter
-kaha
this story is one of my favourites, and I will add it as soon as my computer allows me to get into my personal account. The characters you have created are so real and life like and I have to say Eva reminds me very much of myself... *sigh...*
its rare to find a gem like this on this site sometimes
I cannot wait for the next chapter
-kaha
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was another great chapter. I enjoyed it as usual. Please keep it up and update soon!