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A wonderful chaapter. I really look forward to seeing these chapters. They're well written and you've got a truly amazing writing style. I also love the length.

Awsome story!! i have friends like the guys...except my friend whos like Smack, i aint fuckin him...all ronald does is talk about sex and he calls me a whore...>.< hes such a loser! but eh, what can ya do?? the big bro figure of my friends (like vic) would have to be my friend zac...he loves me lots and its awsome >D...maybe you could have a suprise chapter or eva has a dream where Vic fucks her.....id LOVE to see that! :D!!


YOU FRIGGIN ROCK!!!


love,
Bekka

I really love your story. It is very well written and the story line is great. I am hoping when you get to the last couple of chapters that you let smack and eva still be together. And if you don't that is cool with me. I can't wait tell the guys find out who she really is and her dad. Please update soon with the next chapter. thanks:)

hey I love the fic. And I'm so happy your one of the ones who updates. I just had a question does Vic like Eva, I hope so for I think they'll be good together. Anyways please update.

I'm in love with this story, and Smacks brother sounds awesome!
In the next chapter I'd like to see Stealth blow off his 'Ex'
with some comment about Eva being better, but not actually do her.
I want this to be Vic/Eva, not any one else with her.
I absolutely believe this story has a plot, and in some cases I don't
read all of the sex, because I like the story behind it better. ^^
That's just my taste, though. It would also be nice if in chapter six,
You reveal the 'mystery fucker' from Cleveland. Maybe it could
be a huge shock. I'd also like to know more about Vic's past.
And can't wait to know what the band thinks of Eva when they find out
who her father is! I'm loving this story!
You must update very soon, I'm not sure how long I can wait!
-Jenna-

i love this so much you have no idea! it's fun and exciting! i loved the whole part with pam and i do hope there is more girl on girl in this i loved it it was so fun and nice to see eva with someone who... gets her, also a good thing about her body is that she is only 15 so there is a good chance that her body will become more womanly. i wonder if smack is some how jealous of his brother and her, he keeps bringing it up about what will happen, if so that's great i love it, his turn. although i do still hold out hope for eva and vic in the future, distant but in the future. well anyway i am looking forward to the next chapter i can't wait! great job on everything and this so has a plot! ;)

this was a great chapter, possibly because it showed 'Eva's' more awkward side towards things out side the music scene. It's nice to see that, because it's easy to forget that she is just 15 years old.
As always, excellent work, I eagerly await the next chapter
have fun
-kaha

I really like this chapter can't wait for the dance

This was a good chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens at the dance and whatever else that happens. Please update soon I hope.

this was good very very good and maybe lether fuck his brother
keep going and post soon
bye bye