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for Confessions of a Runaway

by MelodyFate

person went_babe
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff!! Just wanted to let you know your story kicks some serious ass it's really grown on me it suxs we'll have to wait till march for an update..I'll check you at livejournal then!
Kuddos
person Hibiki-chan
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue continue continue continue!!!!!!!!!!
Great story! I am starting to like Vic! Waaaahh! I want Eva to be with Vic but I think it is better for Eva to be with Smack. What are your plans for them?! One moment I'm thinking that the kindness Vic is showing to Eva is more than sisterly love! I'm going crazy... Hehehe.. ^_~
Maybe you make Vic give in to Eva.. I want to see Vic in different light.
Keep up the good work!
person Maggie
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Not the sex scenes, though they're good, but the story. And the characterization. And the execution of the plot, which is good but so many people would fuck it up. And Eva, a little bit. I thought I should tell you, since I've been kinda reading it since the beginning and still haven't reviewed. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I laughed so hard at the end part about the vibrator and Smack.. This was a really good chapter. I enjoyed seeing Eva's character develop. She's not just some sex-crazed maniac like most of the charactors on this website. Ican't wait for the next chapter, and incredible interested at discovering more of Eva's background.

Keep up the good work and hurry it up with the next chapter :P!
person mona
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this has to be one of my most favorite stories ever to be honest. great job and i love it so much and i think your muse is doing fantastic, i can't wait for an update! Great Job! (no pun intended lol) ;)
person Ivy
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Each chapter gets better and better!!! I just love this story so much, I check everyday to see if there's a new one! Congrats!!!
person Chavela
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty good chapter.
person Lucy
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow great job! Please update soon!!!
person Kateri_anne_shale
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* again, a wonderful chapter! do continue!!!

KaS
person freako
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon!! i like it. i want more of her and vic though possibly get them together or something!!
update soon!!!