rate_review Reviews

Saddness, the crap she has to go through. Boy you said that it was going to get dark. you were right. I know theres more. update when you can.

at tumes, i hate smack. and then, at times, he's cool...even partway sweet. Pam rocked though, lol, and thinking about the loosk on their faces was funny. i saw ALL of that coming a mile away. i love it. and i am so in love with Vic, OMG! lol i think of him slightly differently, but his personality is soooooo my type, lol. i lovce ya, girl, you are so damn cool! tehe

Stealth rocks my socks. i like the puppy dog eyes thing. chappies are so long, i cant remember too many speciifics, sorry. i think imma gonna email ya sometime, if thats ok. lol

I should've heed your advise. This is getting way too dark. Thanks for posting.

i've just finished chapter 3, and i saw your end comments on how you thought people'd be reading this for the sex not the story. i just want to say that i don't come to this sight for the great masterpieces of literature, i prefer steamy sex scenes preferaby with story as well, but this story hooked me. i read the summary, was a little curious, than no escaping. Anyway, i hope this doesn't annoy you, but i mostly skip the sex scenes here. not really what floats my boat. i know you said you felt us readers can't really understand unless we read it, but i'm doing okay as it is.

Also, excluding my precious collection of rec reading - must remember to add this, though it will depoend on the end, that's just me - which is comedy romance, this is probably the best written story i've ever read here. by the way, is it true? you said it is but to be cynical you could have just been giving effect. anyway, if its true it's not fair that you're both musical and literary.


*reviewer goes into boring self centered dialogue that doesn't include flattery to the author

Also, i happen to be a fifteen year old girl as well - don't tell!^_^ i hope that doesn't make you too uncomfortable, me reading this. i'm pretty mature for my age, in some areas anyway. a bit heavy on the knowledge and gutterbrain side, virgin on the actual action side. i'm mostly opposite from Eva as she was at the beginning. anyway, it's interesting reading this since we're the same age and all. almost everything else if different, but still. well i've just about run out on I, me, moi and myself so back to the story

hi i'm back, just read 4, go Eva!, and i wanted to screech, i love how you write! whimper.

=He had the delightful job of explaining to me that I'd just technically lost my virginity to the American Gymnast sporting goods company, lucky man. I stopped taking gymnastics after that and switched to modern dance.=

=Isn't it amazing how sex can be such a deeply religious experience? I wonder at times, if God gets really tired of being interrupted by what he thinks is prayer, only to find out that it's just two people going at it.=

that was a really long chapter, but it was good all the same. a lot happened, lol

wow wonder what the others will say

the charies rock, and i hate Smack now. "Eva" should soooooo end up with Vic, lol, jk...maybe. anyways, i likey, and my approval is not lightly given. i hope you kept up the good work ahead of time, since i am kind of behind on this, lol

my god that sucked. i mean nothing personal of course, just that it was of course the worst part of the story so far. please update soon