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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, but I don\'t understand a few things
1. How come she isn\'t pregnant?
2. How come she isn\'t sick?
3. Is Eva and Smack going to fall in love?
Other than that, this story is great!!!
1. How come she isn\'t pregnant?
2. How come she isn\'t sick?
3. Is Eva and Smack going to fall in love?
Other than that, this story is great!!!
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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!! The imagry I get when I read you\'re writing just.... inspires me! I was going crazy when the site was going all weird, and i couldn\'t read the last couple of chapters, i was only about half way through! I\'ll admit, I started crying at a few point, but you made it all so real, i couldn\'t help it. If you ever get this story published, I swear to god, I\'d be one of the first people to run out and buy it.
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter. You were right, that WAS pretty weird, but whats even scarier is that probably happens all the time. At least they got out of hell. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful! you really show how close they are, how much of a family they've become and what they would do for each other. it's too bad she had to sell herself for money. i wonder what she'll tell the guys. i look forward to more of the story. the plot thickens and is developing well. you are doing fantastic with showing the emotions that they go through and how tough things can get with a life like that. you show their ups and down perfectly. good job!
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah!
The beginning of this story is absolutely fantastic. I like the plot of this story. Your writing style is wonderful. Bravo!!
The beginning of this story is absolutely fantastic. I like the plot of this story. Your writing style is wonderful. Bravo!!
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter. The threesome was really well written. I also enjoyed the little agrument at the end between Eva and Vic.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, fabulous chapter. I am beginning to dislike Smack...he seems very domineering.
But as usual, great writing!
But as usual, great writing!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job. Can't wait for the next one.
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always!
You must update asap!
This chapter left us hanging too mch. XD
Loved it, though!
I'd like to see some VicxEva action too!
Please continue to develope the plot!
Thanks for updating as often as you do! <333
-Jenna-
You must update asap!
This chapter left us hanging too mch. XD
Loved it, though!
I'd like to see some VicxEva action too!
Please continue to develope the plot!
Thanks for updating as often as you do! <333
-Jenna-
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story! A very nice read which has a surprising depth to it. Keep up the good work!