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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@10: and no. I didn\'t see that coming. You made a leap off the trampoline, twisted pike position, slam dunk without the ball touching the rim, hell no, didn\'t see that coming at all. Perfect. I think my heart stopped beating. well, you ought to know, you\'re holding it in your hand....Great chapter. I like how sex keeps getting better with Smack while the mysterious Vic is slowly coming out of his shell.
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waw those two last chapter were very very good and sweet and let eva call her dad
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'m shocked, but somehow I\'m not surprised. Good to see the story is back up and running again. You\'re very talented. Good Job.
Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that came out of nowhere. Update soon
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great to see every story I loved back! Especially this one. Keep up the good work. Nice little twist! I know what it\'s like to let stories write themselves. The one I am currently writing feels like it has a mind of it\'s own right now! Again, great job!
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March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
\"We\'re all fucked up in our small little way.\" My god, sometimes Smack is a complete idiot, other times he knows exactly how the world works. It\'s scary.
Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very good new chapter and i love the way he traets her, so tender
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAY. i can review again!!!! you havent updated in a while...why not?
whats that?
YOU DONT LIKE US ANYMORE!!!!!
:\'(
whats that?
YOU DONT LIKE US ANYMORE!!!!!
:\'(
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing, Ive been waiting with baited breath to see how Smack would handle the whole Hell ordeal. Excellent, excellent plot choice. I had tears in my eyes as I read this (Im a hopeless romantic), beautiful chapter.
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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS STORY... & YOU MORE FOR UPDATING :D
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO FREQUENTLY! THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAV. STORIES ON AFF.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO FREQUENTLY! THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAV. STORIES ON AFF.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!