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UPDATE!

honestly...getting kinda ridiculous now?!?!

such an amazing story! seriously, one of the best works that I have read in a LONG time. please continue to update...don't deny us your talent. thanks so much!

Update sometime soon, if possible?

Been reading since you published chapter 1, *love* the story. Kudos.

Don't mean to push but when is the next update coming?

I have never in my life been so quite hooked on a story like yours. And I agree with you that it would do the story no good if you wrote a lame ending for it. Take your time I say. Don't let nobody rush you. I know for sure that you will not abandon this story because of the lengthy chapters and your commitment. Now go and write and write something fantastic just like you've been doing. Don't worry your fellow reader and I will be waiting patiently. Hehehe. Okay now I have a few comments.

Eva and Smack’s relationship seems so...wow. Smack needs to chill out. At least from my point of view. He’s making himself look like a damn hypocrite and I don’t like it one bit. I’m pretty sure Eva isn’t to welcome to it either. But it is, in a way, quite cute, dare I say. He is jealous. He cares for her more than a mere fuck buddy, it seems. And who knows what will happen but, if they end up together I really wouldn’t mind. Even if in the future, if they are just mere fuck buddies. I admit, I have quite a ‘friends’ who I’ve known since my teenage years too. I’m comfortable with them. So whoever Eva ends up with, I kinda hope that her and Smack never grow apart.

What a cool chapter! I think it was the best so far. You're a fantastic writer.

hey
how long are you going to make just waite for a new chpt?
It feels like I'm in rehab. I can't take it anymore.
Please, I'm bedding you. Please update soon.

I just happened upon this story and I can say that I was truly glad I did. I mean sure its nearly 4am, but I couldn't stop. Sure it started out as nice sexy tale, but it became more than that by Chapter 2. I liked reading about Eva's plight as girl trying to be indepedent and understanding the world. I love the characters especially Vic and Smack because their opposites I suppose. But I also appreciate how much attention you give to this story and wanting to stay true to your work. I'm not going to lie as reader we always want to know more as fast and you can tell it. But as a reader you also come across stories that you feel the loss of when you reach the end. So take as much time as you need, but I know that I'll be thinking of this story b/c your work effected me in a deep way. I can't really pinpoint what that is exactly but I guess what I'm really trying to say is thanks for writing.

good story