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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I\'d given up on this website for a while. And I just recently came back to see if any of my favorite stories had updates. To say I was shocked at how many there were for this would be an understatement. I loved these past few chapters. And Smack... aww he was being so cute and nice and yet still so Smack. And WOAH. Poor freaking Vic. Breaks my heart. I\'ve become so completely attached to your characters. They\'re so real. Anyway... just update soon.
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
naw it was great thanks for the update
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am guessing this takes vic out of the running though. I would love to see how this turns out
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t miss the sex scene. It was a bit slow, but it advanced your story a little bit. I enjoted it. Great new chapter! Can\'t wait for ##12
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow i\'m so happy that your writing again. i\'m surprised about Vic. i can\'t wait to find out what happened to her. i\'m also happy that Eva and Smack r geting along better. update soon.
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better with every chapter. I totally did not except the ending of chap. ten. Fekking amazing, MF. Please get Chapter 11 up asap, I can\'t wait to read it. It\'s a wonderful story!
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Really Love this story, I just discoved it and I must say it\'s awsome! Your style of writing is awsome and all the characters aren\'t, like, sound like their a bunch of phoney things. Also I like this new Smack and Eva turn about it\'s very sweet, and I really do like thoes two together even though Smack can be a toltal prick sometimes, keep it up with this story, it\'s awsome and I can\'t wait for the next chapter to find out what\'s the whole reaction to everything and just how everything\'s going to continue!
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW DUDE!! That was intense!!! I sooooo didn\'t see that one coming at all, BUT I absolutly love it!! That was such a nice little plot twist!! BRAVO!! I surely can\'t wait for the next chapter because i soo wanna know what the whole deal with Vic is because i have to say i think he\'s my favorite out of them all!! So sweet and caring ::swoon:: what a nice guy!!^-^
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MELODY FATE! AT LAST I\'VE FOUND YOU!
As I expected and dreamed, this chapter has satisfied all my wonderings for the past...well, however the hell long ago it was since I read this. I am verily proud that so many have reviewed this, your work, which is so deserving of such accolades. I keep thinking \"Detroit\", but maybe it was Cleveland! LOL. I am SO glad the band is out of there, and SO amazed at Eva\'s tenacity and determination. I feel so strongly for her. Thank you for this chapter.
As I expected and dreamed, this chapter has satisfied all my wonderings for the past...well, however the hell long ago it was since I read this. I am verily proud that so many have reviewed this, your work, which is so deserving of such accolades. I keep thinking \"Detroit\", but maybe it was Cleveland! LOL. I am SO glad the band is out of there, and SO amazed at Eva\'s tenacity and determination. I feel so strongly for her. Thank you for this chapter.
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@9: Lump in throat. How the hell did your hand reach into my chest and pull out my heart with just words?