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It's really good I love it. i would really love to get "Eva's" dad in here though and maybe even a little more on her past.

thi was a very good stor and i thanl he must confess his love for her and they must go her twon to her father
keep going and post soon
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Wow, I never knew that Erotica could be well-written and formatted properly. This is pretty good.

omg GIVE ME MORE

love this story so much you don't even know lol so anyway i think the direction of this is going great! i have a feeling, pretty much from the begining, that something will happen with eva and vic. i think the reason that smack got all hot during that song was because i think even though he doesn't want to admit it he is falling for her. as i think vic already has he just isn't quite over him ex-wife. soo glad to find out who the mystery guy was. can't wait for the next chapter and i hope that your block doesn't last, good luck and update when you can. i do hope it's soon! :)

Update! Soon! I love this story, I've just been too lazy to review... *smiles sheepishly*. Until now, that is. This is an AMAZING story, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise! Eva's so real and down-to-earth, and I've got to say-- whenever she feels insecure and another one of her flaws is revealed, I'm realizing, "wow, Eva could very well be an actual person".

I feel as if I know your characters, and that's amazing. This chapter was so eloquently written... Who CARES if there's no sex in it? I definitely don't. I'm just glad for an update. Just remember you've got me hooked!

Don't leave us (your loyal fans), hanging!

Luuuuuuuuv,
Aims

Okay....I haven't READ the new 2 chaps YET... i printed em out so I could later. Even tho I haven't read em yet I know they're good. Well...u haven't updated in like FOREVER! Geeeesh! This story is one of the best on here! Well don't keep me hanging! UPDATE!!

keep going and post soon
bye bye

i love this fic and confess its not jus b/c of the sex. looking forward to findin out who she\'s gonna end up with, update asap.

Hey,
I\'d just like to say that i really like this story so keep up the good work!

One comment i will make, however is that i don\'t think Vic n Eva should end up together, sorry, I would love to see it happen it but i also think it would be way to predictable n corny.

Your writing style flows well n keeps me interested your really good :)