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hi, ive been reading ur story, and i truly love it! i luv how u make chapters so long, i have no idea how u do that! ur a great writer, and this is a great story! i really cannot wait til the band finds out about Eva and what her past is....i luv this story, and i cant stop saying that! ur a great writer, and always will be! keep up the good work, and update when u can.
-sevvy

loved it

I love your fic so much!!!! I so want her and Vic together. Sory if I'm like the only one, but that's how I feel. Please update soon. Thanks

well, isn't this juicy. update soon, i wanna know what this is gonna lead to.

I loved this chapter. Some more character development. I was expecting Smack to have trouble admitting that he loved Eva, but it wasn't that. Nice! Can't wait for update.

Hey, sorry to hear u've had writers block, but don't despair, i think u write really well & can't wait for the next chapter!

I've also gotta say this is the best story ive (personally) ever read on AFF, keep up the superb work.

i was so excited to see another chapter up...i loved it, so i was wondering something...why hasn't her father put out a missing child add? you would think that a father would be worried about his 15 year old daughter, and if his band is famous then it would be all over the news... or is it she just doesn't know about it yet and that's how the guys find out? also i wonder if she runs into any of her father's fans, ones that know everything and reconize her as his daughter, even though her looks are a bit different or even someone who knows her... well i think this story is great, one of the best on here and i do hope that your writers block unclogs itself lol please please please be able to update soon i can't go as long has it has been because of the site for another chapter, i think i'll go crazier than i already am if i am left waiting...

love it love it, love Eva seriously, consider this 100% reader adoration in one sentence and please please please please do continue and quickly, good lucck on writers block etc.

Man!I seriously cant fukin express how much I enjoyed this story ....man I love Eva and I love Vic and I love Smack and Dennis and Tray,im in love with your characters.I dont have anything extravagantly long or constructive to say so ill just keep it short by saying "this story fuckin rocks my fuckin socks!!" lol.I hope you update soon ...btw the sex? HOLY SHIT! DONT DROP THE FUCKIN SOAP!!!Anyways keep it up and ill definitely keep reading!

This is sooo good! The sex is amazing AND the plot is amazing!! I want to know it Eva ever calls her dad... UPDATE SOON!