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This whole thing with Vic was awesome. That's all I have to say because it is 4:40 AM.

i really oughtta go to bed....i wasnt going to say anything here, but the two of them's little thing...aw! romance? wheee stuff no brain 4:57 AGHHHH

i've been reading stories on this website for a long time, and i've read a lot of stories that i really enjoyed and liked, but i've never commented on any of them before. I love this story, please keep it going, its really good.

I freaking love this story so freaking much, and I just love the newest chapter, Smack.. being jealous! yay! I love that, personally I love Smack and Eva together and I just loved that scene. I CANNOT wait for the next update to happen for your wonderful story. Thanks so much for being such a great author.

Omg this was the best chapter. I absolutely love this story and ive been following it since the very beggining. I always kinda wanted Eva to end up with Vic because he never fucked her and that HAS to mean something, but after this chapter im starting to feel sorry for Smack. I hated the fact that he would make her beg for it and that he gave her up to a stranger, but it seems as if now he actually cares for Eva. Its different and confusing as hell but i love it
Please update soon. im really looking forward to it.

I usually don't leave reviews on AFF.net anymore. This story, however, is cause for exception.

It must be admitted that the base plot - girl runs away from home, joins a band, finds out she's a sex fiend - is not the most original, but that's the ONLY not-so-good thing about the story. The relationships between the characters are complex, because the characters themselves are far more developed than in most erotica stories. The explicit stuff is written beautifully and is thus hot as hell. The relationship between Smack and Eva is a facinating central plot, as the focus shifts from Eva's naive self-hurting (from believing she's ugly to believing that physical response equals enjoyment), to Smack's lack of sensitivity which slowly improves as he develops stronger feelings for Eva - as a wise person once said, "Where there's great sex, people will try to build relationships."

And, of course, aside from my carefully neutral analysis, a part of me was also very turned on by the sex. I can definitly relate to Eva, and sometimes I realy wish I had a Smack of my own. *evil grin*

Please, please, PLEASE continue to write this story!

wow, this is really intense! I feel like I actually know the characters, and how they really feel. I can't wait for the next chapter so that I know how this little confession affected Smack and Eva. and Vic sounds REALLY hott...^_^

AWESOMO!!! I really hope Vic&whatsherface hook up and leave poor ol Stash or whatever his name is all jealous. Sorry I don't remember the names lol ^^ well... you'd better update soon...or I'll kill u...SERIOUSLY...I will....I know where u sleep & live... I KNOW...no i seriously don't...but i still know...you know i know...point is...

UPDATE!!!

Amazing story. This was my favorite story before the website made the change and i thought i wouldnt see it back on here again once everything was worked out. Keep writing, your extremely talented, and this is still my favorite story =]

MORE!!!!!I WNT MORE!!!