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Great chapter. I'm glad you are going to continue with this story because it's one of my favourites. The relationship between Eva and Smack just really intrigues me and I'm hoping it will develop further. Hope you can update soon.

I like the new chapter! It definitely characterized Tray a little more, and he isn't such a minor character as he used to be! I do hope to be seeing Eva confront Smack on this! Can't wait!

Aww man. i really wish she wouls just stand up to Smack already. CMON! anyways great story. i loove it! Please update soon.

I happy your not giving up on this story. It's to good to let go of. I really like how it's going now. But I would like to hear more on how vic feels about her and see eva talk more with smack. please update soon.

so glad ur so dedicated to this story cuz so are ur readers. if ur going through a block u could leave an author's note asking 4 suggestions for the fic, im sure u'd get feedback. and if u dont want readers t b able t predict wats going t' happen frm that feedback, u could leave an email address to send it to. if y dont take this bit of advice i wont blame u, it is a bit strange havin' others tell u where ur story should go. take ur time, don't rush it, inspiration will come. i'll keep an eye out 4 updates, good luck.

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dont give up this is one of my favs. i would like to c vic and eva hook up, even if its just once, this girl needs to experience sum1 else's cock.

ride out the block it'll pass; lookin foward to wen it does.

Ahh I looove this new chapter, and I'm so glad that you were able to update... and it's quite understandable that you have a writers block and I really don't mind the wait, which I'm sure many people don't so long as we get these wonderful chapters that you keep putting out for us! ^.^ Ahh more Eve and Smack.. I love those two.. but I wonder is Eve going to blow up at Smack after their horniness wears off? Just what WILL happen in this next chapter, I egerly await for it's arrival no matter HOW long it takes to it to get out! Thanks for writing this story!!

This story is awesome. Amazingly written. Once you finish it you should try and get it published or something, it amazing. I love it. I hope she calls her father soon though. Maybe just one of those quick, "Hey, I'm a live, I'm fine." Type of calls. I'm sure the band is gonna flip out when they find out her dad is a guitarist for a famous band. I can't wait to see how all that plays out. Keep up the great work with this and update soon please. I love this story.

OMFG SERIOUSLY I LOVE THIS STORY.. I just read it all today and WOW I LOVE IT. I loved it when smack was being all gental because you could really see him caring when he was like that. They totally need to work things out though like they need to have that talk they could be lieing in bed.. just waking up and she could suddenly go..'I wouldnt choose him over you' talking about how she wouldnt choose vic over him.. and then she would get up and go to the shower or something.. and I think that smack should talk to trey just about her how he feels I'm sure he doesnt love her or anything.. well at least he wont admit it .. but he is most likely really confused he has never been the type to care about people in general and now after the 'hell ville prostitution thing' and him being more than freaked out mabye he really does care about her.??? I CANT WAIT FOR THE UPDATE

I love this fic. I think you're and excellent writer.I can't wait til the next chapter. Write on