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ooohh new peoples, eva doin an average teen thing?! huuraah for throwing me through a looptey-loop.

work through ur issue(s) let inspiartion come, then write. <----- follow these steps, they've had good results so far [ignoring real-life ALWAYS bites u in the ass, this comes from a credible source]

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OMG YOU CANT HAVE HER FALLING FOR HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE WANTS SMACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I am on my knees begging you PLEASE just have smack get all jelous and he can IDK say his feelings for her.. not like I love you... or mabye IDK if anything just have him want to be her boyfriend PLEASE

this was very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye

Again, love it :) It's good to see some more characters again. I can't wait to see what you do with them. Keep up the good work.

Åhh...what will Smack say now!!


I liked this chapter...I almost fell in love with the new band :P

I adored this chapter. I really did. I was wondering why Smack was being so insistent and then it was so... I don't know, cute? When she realized he was jealous. I mean, yeah, she had total reason to be pissed at him for that but dear god it was so cute. Smack being jealous. It's so weird to think. Haha I love your story. I feel so much like I know the characters and just... I like that a lot. Ok though, must get on to the next chapter.

I'm still here reading your wonderful story. I would like to see more of vic and eva. but then again I think eva and smack are all right to, but I like vic and eva more. please update as soon as you can.

A fantastic chapter yet again! I'e been following this fic for hell of a long time, I love the plot, the people in it and the story itself, I occaisionally spot a mistake but I wont critisise you for that as its so rare. I thoroughly enjoy your fic and though I think i've reviewed before but i thought it was time to review you again. I look forward to the next chapter.

I hope your writers block clears up and hope you are well

Look forward to the next chapter
Sin.

Eek. I made a really funny noise when I read the end of that. It was so great. Paul being all sad she wasn't staying for breakfast and then asking her out and her agreeing before she even realized what was happening. I really did like that. And now, of course, I'm dying for an update. Dang. Now I'm sad cause I have to wait. Well, anyway, I was wondering. Though you don't have to do it if you don't want it to, I was wondering if you could email when you did update. Purely because I don't get on aff much except to check for updates on my favorite stories. And I'm just really anxious to see an update for this and so I wanna know right away, you know? Instead of not realizing till one of the rare times I check this site. Anyway, once again, you don't have to if you don't want to or are too busy or something, just thought I'd ask.

I fuckin' loved this chapter. SO long! I hope you can resolve your rl crap, and I can't wait for the next chapter.