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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey I've been a fan of this story for a really long time and keep waiting for you to update it. I know you have writers block but I wanted to know are you ever gonna finish this story. I really would like to know how this ends.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've been reading this fic for more than a year and I still can't stop speculating about it. :D You're a very good writer and I love how you keep me interested with whatever Eva thinks. There's always something there to reflect on.
And, of course, the sex is incredible. None of that overly-kinky and unrealistic stuff. It's all pretty down-to-earth and...well, cool. I especially like how you expose her to all the things she could have experienced if she didn't run away (like the prom thing, the sex with Paul, etc.). So there.
Oh, and though it completely strains me to consider the waiting, I agree with your take on your writer's block. I don't think I would be satisfied much if you gave us quickly-put-together but horrible chapters. I just hope it comes together for you soon enough. :D
So, that's pretty much it. I thank you for the experience of reading your story. It was absolutely mind-blowing. Until next time...
--Laura
And, of course, the sex is incredible. None of that overly-kinky and unrealistic stuff. It's all pretty down-to-earth and...well, cool. I especially like how you expose her to all the things she could have experienced if she didn't run away (like the prom thing, the sex with Paul, etc.). So there.
Oh, and though it completely strains me to consider the waiting, I agree with your take on your writer's block. I don't think I would be satisfied much if you gave us quickly-put-together but horrible chapters. I just hope it comes together for you soon enough. :D
So, that's pretty much it. I thank you for the experience of reading your story. It was absolutely mind-blowing. Until next time...
--Laura
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, I can't explain how wonderful this story is. How real, and how insightful.
It took me... I don't know how many months to get up to its recent chapter, only because I took great time in reading each chapter throughly and taking breaks to give me time to really think about it. I'm glad I waited a few months between some chapters, because I am not disappointed in slow updates. This is like a good burger, the longer it takes, the more delicious it is.
If this was on sale as a book, I wouldn't even think about buying it - it would be a given. (For those who don't understand what I mean, its just that this story is so good that mere money would be like shit on my shoe compared to the value of the book).
I don't think the category you have it in does it justice, because this story is so much more than just sex.
You worked out every detail of Eva to the point where if you hadn't told me this was fiction, I would believe it without much question at all, except for of course, the fact the band was made up. Time-lines, dates and knowledge of the music of each era is remarkable, and thus making it feel even more real.
Smack, seems like a personification of many guys out there. I feel like, instead of like most stories, like the characters are black and white that yours really have a wide array of emotions that make them who they are and I admire you so much for being able to do that without even realizing it yourself... or maybe you do? In any case. It just seems like you don't even have to try to be canon with your characters, its just something that comes naturally with your talent.
I just want to thank you so much for writing this, because the world needs more good, grounded reality-based fiction out there thats not damn right boring out of your mind. This story, right here, is REAL. Not like Tom Sawyer or I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, even two of my favorites Of Mice and Men and Flowers for Algernon.
I can, and I'm sure most people (even those who aren't in their teens) can connect with the characters here and relate with them.. FEEL with them.
Please, keep writing. If not for my sake, for the sake of good writing in itself.
It took me... I don't know how many months to get up to its recent chapter, only because I took great time in reading each chapter throughly and taking breaks to give me time to really think about it. I'm glad I waited a few months between some chapters, because I am not disappointed in slow updates. This is like a good burger, the longer it takes, the more delicious it is.
If this was on sale as a book, I wouldn't even think about buying it - it would be a given. (For those who don't understand what I mean, its just that this story is so good that mere money would be like shit on my shoe compared to the value of the book).
I don't think the category you have it in does it justice, because this story is so much more than just sex.
You worked out every detail of Eva to the point where if you hadn't told me this was fiction, I would believe it without much question at all, except for of course, the fact the band was made up. Time-lines, dates and knowledge of the music of each era is remarkable, and thus making it feel even more real.
Smack, seems like a personification of many guys out there. I feel like, instead of like most stories, like the characters are black and white that yours really have a wide array of emotions that make them who they are and I admire you so much for being able to do that without even realizing it yourself... or maybe you do? In any case. It just seems like you don't even have to try to be canon with your characters, its just something that comes naturally with your talent.
I just want to thank you so much for writing this, because the world needs more good, grounded reality-based fiction out there thats not damn right boring out of your mind. This story, right here, is REAL. Not like Tom Sawyer or I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, even two of my favorites Of Mice and Men and Flowers for Algernon.
I can, and I'm sure most people (even those who aren't in their teens) can connect with the characters here and relate with them.. FEEL with them.
Please, keep writing. If not for my sake, for the sake of good writing in itself.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS.
The sex scenes, actually, I don't find much attractive at all. The description, is wonderful - but I am not one for cursing or saying 'Oh Fuck'. It kinda ruins it for me, which is exactly why I adored the scene between her and Paul. The silence, was golden! :3
Humiliation through sex has always been one of my favorites in erotica stores, but Smack makes it seem even realer to me. That the romantic, non-cursing guys out there wouldn't being saying 'You're so sexy, I'll deny that I even have an erection and walk around like nothing is wrong'. No. Smack is real as real could be.
He does none of that... pretending crap for too long, he knows what he wants and he's not ashamed. I think its that pride that makes Eva keep coming back, because he doesn't make her feel embarrassed as a opposed to making her feel like she's just playing his 'game' (the scene in the kitchen being an exception).
I think I understand a little more why she feels so okay with having sex with him having him treat her like that, its cause he never really brings it up outside the bedroom and you can tell he respects her far to much to tease her about it. It just seems like a daily activity.
Lol. I'm rambling. So sorry. XD
Then again, how can you not? The story is far to fun NOT to talk about!
The sex scenes, actually, I don't find much attractive at all. The description, is wonderful - but I am not one for cursing or saying 'Oh Fuck'. It kinda ruins it for me, which is exactly why I adored the scene between her and Paul. The silence, was golden! :3
Humiliation through sex has always been one of my favorites in erotica stores, but Smack makes it seem even realer to me. That the romantic, non-cursing guys out there wouldn't being saying 'You're so sexy, I'll deny that I even have an erection and walk around like nothing is wrong'. No. Smack is real as real could be.
He does none of that... pretending crap for too long, he knows what he wants and he's not ashamed. I think its that pride that makes Eva keep coming back, because he doesn't make her feel embarrassed as a opposed to making her feel like she's just playing his 'game' (the scene in the kitchen being an exception).
I think I understand a little more why she feels so okay with having sex with him having him treat her like that, its cause he never really brings it up outside the bedroom and you can tell he respects her far to much to tease her about it. It just seems like a daily activity.
Lol. I'm rambling. So sorry. XD
Then again, how can you not? The story is far to fun NOT to talk about!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@17. its an amazing story and i wish you would update!
*DB*
*DB*
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Could you update SOON please? You're storys really good and you can't just keep me waiting for the next chapter! :)
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello? I know you want time to write the next chapter but its been ages!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow.
This story is AMAZING. I'm not sure what exactly it is about this fic, but I just can't stop reading. I love, love, love, love, LOVE it.
Usually, I read stories on AFF for the smut alone, 'cause when there is a plot, it tends to suck. However, while the smut in this one is great, it's the plot that's kept me going the most. And the way you write. It's just so appealing. I actually squeal or gasp out loud when reading it; sometimes I giggle, sometimes I let out a sad sigh. Your story has got me captivated. And for that, I'm really grateful to you. *gives cookie factory*
I hope that nasty case of writers block goes away soon. It's very annoying, both for the author and the readers. Well, in my experience it's usually more annoying for the author, because you've got all the right ideas, but it just won't come out. So hopefully the words will soon flow again, so everyone can be happy. =D
Keep up the great work!
- Jessie
This story is AMAZING. I'm not sure what exactly it is about this fic, but I just can't stop reading. I love, love, love, love, LOVE it.
Usually, I read stories on AFF for the smut alone, 'cause when there is a plot, it tends to suck. However, while the smut in this one is great, it's the plot that's kept me going the most. And the way you write. It's just so appealing. I actually squeal or gasp out loud when reading it; sometimes I giggle, sometimes I let out a sad sigh. Your story has got me captivated. And for that, I'm really grateful to you. *gives cookie factory*
I hope that nasty case of writers block goes away soon. It's very annoying, both for the author and the readers. Well, in my experience it's usually more annoying for the author, because you've got all the right ideas, but it just won't come out. So hopefully the words will soon flow again, so everyone can be happy. =D
Keep up the great work!
- Jessie
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's been a while. Still love your story to death and want to see it continued. If you're still around, I'd like to hear from you! Keep healthy! <3
- Jenna
- Jenna