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by janette

person Error
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg this story.....
UPDATE D: I WANT UPDAAAAAAAATTTTEEEE
what can I say BALINT ISH SO BADASS
person kitty
schedule January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
like all your BW universe stories; I love this one to! <3 *feeds ur muse* you are so talented in what you do. any story you write turns out to be gold. I can not wait to read more of this story. (and all the rest of them)

I would like to be put on the mailing list for updates. my e-mail. kittyvamp18@yahoo.com
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... Brings back great memories~ XD Woot! Anticipating the next update! *swoon*
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it <3
person Johanne
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

You've never heard from me before, but I've been watching your website, BW LJ and even here now for a really long time now. Since sometime before I moved, which was over two and a half years now (creeper much, haha?). Even when updates were months in coming, I was still checking around and holding out. I guess I was always a little bit shy and self-concious of my own writing, so I never spoke up until now. And speaking of speaking up,

Bait. The juicy Balint seduces, beds, and kills as is typical to the BW universe. The predictablity doesn't make it any less fun to read, don't get me wrong. There is no heavy angsting or love, just a good ol' time. :) I particuliarly like the little glimpse it gives into the lives of the Odogi. To be honest, Radu has always been one of my favourite characters (Dimitri too, actually) and I've always been interested in seeing more of the Odogi aside from him. So, you know... If you ever need a change of pace or anything like that... ;)

Looking forward to updates :)
person Cindyip
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update, dying to see what happens:)
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luv these stories cant wait 4 u to update
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I feel special!

Wonderful as always. You know this is one of my favorites!

Pssst, more of a space between the end of the fic and the responses? Just so we can more clearly see where it ends. Or a division even. *loves*

I like this chapter. It keeps you wondering, even if I semi-already know what's coming. It keeps the attention, and I like seeing Zach and Dom bickering a bit. Your dialogue always feels real to me. ^^ Yay, keep it up!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only made it through Chapter 4 - and I GOTTA go to bed.

But couldn't leave without telling you what a nice little tale you've got going.

Balint is certainly an interesting character. Get the impression he really was upset by the rape - but he sure is determined not to let it affect him.

Dom is definitely in for quite a few surprises. And so am I - whoever turns out to be alpha.

(Dom most assuredly needs to cut Balint's nails!)
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extraordinary - now I wonder if Dom is going to survive.

Maybe he'll end up being Balint's fuck-toy...

I'd like to be notified of updates: AydenSadari@aol.com