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Great story! I don't usually read this type of story, but it seemed interesting, so I decided to read a few chapters. I'm glad I did, I absolutely love it! :) Wish the chapters were a bit longer, but other than that, I find the story has a nice flow to it. I hope to read more from you soon!

Aww you poor thing you! I understand totally how frustrating it is to have people read and not review. Bad manners, I call it!....
Anyway, today is the first time I came upon your delightful story....and I enjoyed reading it. Ok, there were a couple of spelling mistakes, but they didn't take anything away from what you were trying to tell, so that's not a problem for me.
Don't let a lack of reviews stop you writing. If you have a story to tell....tell it!
I for one, look forward to your next update....

oh please don't stop there.it was really good and i would like more

please don't have any of them captured...pretty please...Something bad always happens when they get captured. I like the vamp he is very dark and mysterious. Also his dry wit is very charming.

Hi I just discovered your story since I don't really read the angst stories I stick to slash. no one has been updating hence my wandering into angst. I am so sorry that no one reviewed earlier and I really admire your gumption in continue to write despite that. I like the story and the characters. I have to say that I skipped over the lanton rape scene and am very grateful that you had the head up at the beginning of the ch. I just felt really bad for him after everything he had been through and couldn't bring myself to read more about his abuse. I really liked the little girl and I didn't think you killed her off too soon. and it really wasn't that gory since you didn't describe it as it was happening. I also have to say that even as the other two left lanton alone I knew something was going to happen to him I had just hoped that for once someone would save him. I like the werewolf papa and the vamp mama. I figured Vlad was a vamp even before you revealed his name which is classic vamp. please keep writing even if no one reviews the hit counter goes up you know someone is reading. people don't review for different reasons. Some people are just plain lazy some read at times that are not opportune for reviews and some like myself don't really have anything to say except one line and feel bad so we don't leave anything at all.

Wow I think that your story is wonderfull and do pleas continue.

sorry i\'ve not review in some time but i just read what you have wrote and i hope there is more soon.please don\'t stop there.it\'s great to be back and hope you have more soon.please.

Ummmm...Hi
I\'ve never given anyone a review before so I\'ll just say I really like your story and I hope you continue to up-date regularly. I usually read only Harry Potter but this came up on a search and I decided to read it. I really like your way of writing and I think I will shut up and quit making a fool of myself now. Bub-Bye and good luck

Well, so far I like your character depictions but some of the chapters need development for better flow. The human girl for instance could have been developed better. For a while I thought she was going to be an important character but she died in the next chapter making her an added acessory character that had no real purpose.

I just found your story and it is excellent. I especially like how you characterize Lanton and Mervan's relationship, while Mervan is interested in Lanton he is not pushing him, knowing that Lanton's background makes him wary. I thought the incident involving the youn g human girl and her death was a bit short, but served the purpose (to get her out of the story to bring in the Werewolf). The revealing of Lanton's history and his heritage is a nice surprise. Keep up the good work, I look forward to hearing more on this story from you.