rate_review Reviews

love this pls make more love tenticles. also could u use my rp character tenama shirohime in ur story.

cool i cant wait to read more... but can u write more guy on girl stuff.... or atleast more tentacle sex so i can ignore the girls doing it.

I found this story to be very well written, more than obviously thought and planed, and very well composed. I loved reading it, and would love to see more of this character in actions with her mentor. It\'s a shame that the story has gotten so little review, however let the songs of praise be sung, and the celebration of a great author be had. Look foreward to reading more when posted, though I don\'t know if I can contain my glee.

Sincerly,
Kitten Kitsune of the red sun.

Very interesting. Original presentation, and well written. Most definately like.

Sensai approves! Love the story hun, can't wait for the next chapter!

is this based on a manga on the net? because i saw a manga like that. i think that htis story is good...... and everybody know what gonna happen men humilliation.... but please, do that to the ones that deservit.....

Nope, not based off a manga in any way. Incidently, if anyone reading these reviews or reading this fic is interested, the SASD is accepting further testimonials... that is, I'm looking for more fics to add in to this one. If it's based around succubi... not incubi, but female sexual demons, that's accepted. I'll be looking for grammar, spelling, originality to an extent, and overall quality. Also, if you email a story to me, please provide a brief background for the main character/narrator.

Nearly done Binkan's story. Any suggestions for another story?

i love your format. i love that it's different and i love the style of your 'editor' and i love the opportunity it provides for you to write in multiple voices.